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2013-12-14 [The Black Goat]: just a couple minor things- it needs a spell check, replace the musical collar with a modified subdermal comm link that emits music only he can hear, and cut out the part that talks about him being sent out to kill people since we're not to that point yet
2013-12-14 [Koho Ai]: Okay
2013-12-14 [Koho Ai]: Updates completed and spell check done.
2013-12-14 [The Black Goat]: great, go ahead and post it in the comments of the dr character page
2013-12-14 [Koho Ai]: Roger
2013-12-14 [Elwyne]: why does this guy remind me of the dementors in Harry Potter? They were dementors right? The ones that sucked souls out of peoples mouths?
2013-12-14 [ancienteye]: Those were the dementors. :P
2013-12-14 [shadow of darkness]: I was thinking the same thing, although his physical description reminds me entirely of my own character, Kurtis Smith from x-men united lol It's weird whenever I stumble across people who have the same idea
2013-12-14 [Koho Ai]: He's a wraith which is sort of like a dementor, but I have to give credit to [The Black Goat] for the kiss idea.
2013-12-14 [shadow of darkness]: I like him. I think he and Ly might get along nicely.
2013-12-14 [The Black Goat]: it was an idea I had for an old rp called zombies and vampires and wraiths, oh my!
But I've always had a soft spot for the whole kiss of death thing
2013-12-14 [ancienteye]: That old RP idea sounds like it would've been fun~
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